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PostSubject: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:57 am

Before I add the final wrinkles and details I need suggestions to improve him. All criticism is welcome.








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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 7:55 am

Please could you share some real profile and from above views ? Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:46 am

I'm not sure if the eyes are not too bulging, but it's so beautiful overall!
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:08 am

I am just struck dumb ( yes, it IS possible !!!) with wonder !
What a fantastic model cheers

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:36 am

It's wonderful work! Congratulations! Sad(o)): I would like to see profile too, I think maybe line of the belly goes too much upwards in part nearer hind legs scratch

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:15 am

WoW Wow Wow,

what a phantastic model cheers cheers cheers cheers cheers

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 3:38 pm

Here are the other pictures


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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Feb 17, 2013 3:51 pm

Great cheers cheers

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PostSubject: Baltimore zoo   Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:41 pm

Looking good!
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:14 pm

Thanks everyone for the compliments I am glad you all like him.
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Mon Feb 18, 2013 8:05 pm

I still don't know about the head scratch I guess Fisva is right



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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Mon Feb 18, 2013 9:32 pm

He's fantastic Ethan! You're doing an excellent job cheers

I agree with Christophe, maybe the head needs a little more work, especially the eyes.
They seem to stick out a bit too much, but he's really wonderful, can't wait to see him finished!

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Thu Feb 21, 2013 5:34 am

I re-sculpted the head and it is a little bit smaller so please all critiques so I can fix the face before I reattach the head, sorry it took me so long to post pictures I get really busy on week days. I am also adding fat to the stomach.


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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Thu Feb 21, 2013 7:35 am

Now it looks perfect!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Thu Feb 21, 2013 8:25 am

Here is my point Wink I've changed the eyes' place


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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Thu Feb 21, 2013 1:48 pm

So you would like me to move the eyes down? correct me if I am wrong. I am glad you like the new face Fisva thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:28 pm

@kudu11 wrote:



You could move eyes minimally backward as it is above, but if it is too much work you could leave it as it is already. The change would be so small that it wouldn't be very visible.
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Thu Feb 21, 2013 8:18 pm

@kudu11 wrote:
Before I add the final wrinkles and details I need suggestions to improve him. All criticism is welcome.







Very successful model, congratulations Sad(o)):
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:40 pm

@kudu11 wrote:
So you would like me to move the eyes down? correct me if I am wrong. I am glad you like the new face Fisva thanks.

Yes, it is my idea... My other idea is I like very much your work Wink Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Sep 22, 2013 8:13 am

I know it has been a while since I posted in this topic but I would like to finish one of these rhinos some time soon. I decided to restart the whole rhino. I used a rhino head as a basis that I originally made for the first rhino but was too small compared to the body. This rhino is slightly smaller and is still a work in progress. I would like any suggestions for any anatomical errors, so that I could fix them before I work on fine tuning muscle tone and texture him. I am hoping to make copies of him after I finish. All suggestions are welcome.





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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Sep 22, 2013 8:17 am

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause 

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Sep 22, 2013 9:15 am

He's looking so fabulous Ethan!!

I have been looking at the photo of your rhino sculpture that's looking straight on, I've tried to find photos similar for you to compare.
See how in these photos below, his tummy sticks out further than his shoulders, they're incredibly solid looking creatures.  The shoulders are perhaps too wide at the top and square on your sculpture, they should be narrower at the top and smoothly get wider towards the chest/torso making a kind of triangular shape.
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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Sep 22, 2013 3:15 pm

It's beautiful! Congrats! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Sun Sep 22, 2013 6:22 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Black Rhino Update   Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:29 pm

Great work, really fantastic. Cool Cool Cool
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