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A-J
Country/State : The Netherlands Age : 28 Joined : 2012-05-11 Posts : 1543
| Subject: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 1:33 pm | |
| Hello friends, It's a long time since I started a new topic, but now I finally have something to share with you :) Yesterday I stated with the sculpting of "Max", a Golden retriever that belongs to a friend of my mother. It's supposed to be a birthday (some day in march ) present and I hope I'll have it finished in time. Anyway, here's what I've done so far. He's not too big (even though I planned it to be bigger but I suppose my hands have become too used to sculpting small things...). I've included a comparison picture with a smaller schleich dog. I do not own any Goldens of major brands to compare it with... [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]Anyone tips or other criticism? _________________ [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] Anne-Joke [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] ajs.artistry - Instagram AJs Artistry Shop - Etsy
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Anasta SchwarzeWölfin
Country/State : Russia Age : 27 Joined : 2012-11-16 Posts : 1122
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 3:17 pm | |
| I haven't any big notices to say right now Now he looks very well, I need to see more detailed version. It's one thing that I would improve: do you think that you need to smooth his scapulas? I like all other details Thank you for sharing! _________________ My shadow's the only one that walks beside me, My shallow heart's the only thing that's beating. Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me, 'Til then I walk alone.[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] |
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SUSANNE Admin
Country/State : Denmark, the peninsula of Djursland. Age : 72 Joined : 2010-09-30 Posts : 37808
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:05 pm | |
| He is beautyful, even if not finished Anasta has a point, - the shoulderbaldes stand out a bit too much, but perhaps you planned to smoothe is when making "fur" ? The pose, the head, the proportions are wonderful |
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A-J
Country/State : The Netherlands Age : 28 Joined : 2012-05-11 Posts : 1543
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:32 pm | |
| Thank you Susanne and Anasta, for the advise and for liking him so far. The proportions were my first concern so that's probably whey I haven't smoothed the schoulderblades yet I think I'll be working on it :) _________________ [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] Anne-Joke [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] ajs.artistry - Instagram AJs Artistry Shop - Etsy |
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LeeAnn
Country/State : United States Age : 25 Joined : 2013-01-20 Posts : 10339
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:46 pm | |
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costicuba
Country/State : Bulgaria Age : 43 Joined : 2014-06-14 Posts : 4221
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 4:57 pm | |
| I also like it so far :) Go boldly forward :) |
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A-J
Country/State : The Netherlands Age : 28 Joined : 2012-05-11 Posts : 1543
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 6:13 pm | |
| Thanks Costa and LeeAnn :) He now has some more facial details, it looks better in RL but here's a picture anyway: [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]_________________ [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] Anne-Joke [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] ajs.artistry - Instagram AJs Artistry Shop - Etsy |
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Anasta SchwarzeWölfin
Country/State : Russia Age : 27 Joined : 2012-11-16 Posts : 1122
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Feb 15, 2015 6:27 pm | |
| - A-J wrote:
- Thanks Costa and LeeAnn :)
He now has some more facial details, it looks better in RL but here's a picture anyway: [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] Good job! Hope you'll share some new photos soon |
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googie212
Country/State : Georgia Age : 21 Joined : 2015-03-06 Posts : 208
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Fri Mar 27, 2015 12:20 am | |
| I like Max! even more than the Schleich Mixed-Breed dog beside him! Good job! _________________ My prized possession, Cyclone the black stallion. [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] |
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A-J
Country/State : The Netherlands Age : 28 Joined : 2012-05-11 Posts : 1543
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sat Apr 04, 2015 7:14 pm | |
| - googie212 wrote:
- I like Max! even more than the Schleich Mixed-Breed dog beside him! Good job!
Thanks Here are some more recent photos of him: [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]_________________ [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] Anne-Joke [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] ajs.artistry - Instagram AJs Artistry Shop - Etsy |
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Mgarat
Country/State : Spain Age : 66 Joined : 2015-03-09 Posts : 938
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sat Apr 04, 2015 7:31 pm | |
| Ii is impressive even unpainted and I am sure it´ll be superb if you paint it. |
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Anasta SchwarzeWölfin
Country/State : Russia Age : 27 Joined : 2012-11-16 Posts : 1122
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sat Apr 04, 2015 7:51 pm | |
| Very nice! Hope you'll finish him soon Can't wait for it _________________ My shadow's the only one that walks beside me, My shallow heart's the only thing that's beating. Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me, 'Til then I walk alone.[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] |
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Ana
Country/State : Utrecht/NL Age : 37 Joined : 2010-04-01 Posts : 11003
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sat Apr 04, 2015 10:00 pm | |
| Very beautiful dog! Amazing work! I love the fur detail, pose and everything! If I would suggest very little, really miniature change, I would add some material above the eyes, some sort of "eyebrows" (not exactly but I think you know what I mean) Dogs have some muscles above the eyes, that way eyes normally look like they are a bit deeper. I hope you don't mean that little advice? It's really a minor change I think? Other than that he looks really perfect. The little paws are so cute Can't wait to see him painted _________________ Anna Horse and Bird studio - Horse sculptures My model horse collection
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LeeAnn
Country/State : United States Age : 25 Joined : 2013-01-20 Posts : 10339
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sat Apr 04, 2015 10:04 pm | |
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A-J
Country/State : The Netherlands Age : 28 Joined : 2012-05-11 Posts : 1543
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sat Apr 04, 2015 11:55 pm | |
| Thank you friends I'm happy you like him - Ana wrote:
If I would suggest very little, really miniature change, I would add some material above the eyes, some sort of "eyebrows" (not exactly but I think you know what I mean) Dogs have some muscles above the eyes, that way eyes normally look like they are a bit deeper. I hope you don't mean that little advice? It's really a minor change I think? I understand what you mean. I'll add the "eyebrows" to my sculpture as soon as I'm able to work on it again :) Thanks for the advise I always appreciate contructive critisism. I can't improve my work without it, can I? _________________ [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] Anne-Joke [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] ajs.artistry - Instagram AJs Artistry Shop - Etsy |
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MiniZoo
Country/State : Australia Age : 28 Joined : 2011-02-01 Posts : 406
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Apr 05, 2015 7:05 am | |
| Looking good A-J agree with Ana on the eyes, but for me the pose and texture is fantastic! _________________ - Tahnaya [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] https://www.minizoo.com.au/ |
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Kikimalou Admin
Country/State : Lille, FRANCE Age : 60 Joined : 2010-04-01 Posts : 21190
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Sun Apr 05, 2015 8:12 am | |
| It is already a great job, I will wait for the next step |
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JonasV
Country/State : Finland Age : 28 Joined : 2012-07-23 Posts : 5657
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue Apr 07, 2015 10:37 am | |
| Looking very good so far! Amazing how some people have such a talent! _________________ Jonas Animals are my friends. I don't eat my friends. [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] |
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A-J
Country/State : The Netherlands Age : 28 Joined : 2012-05-11 Posts : 1543
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue May 19, 2015 1:54 pm | |
| Thanks again friends! A few days ago I did the finishing touch of Max and I can now say that he's finished Here are some pictures: [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]I hope you like him! _________________ [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] Anne-Joke [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] ajs.artistry - Instagram AJs Artistry Shop - Etsy |
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Anasta SchwarzeWölfin
Country/State : Russia Age : 27 Joined : 2012-11-16 Posts : 1122
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue May 19, 2015 1:57 pm | |
| Yaaay, finally you've finished him! Can you take more detailed photos please? If you do, I'll fully say to you my opinion _________________ My shadow's the only one that walks beside me, My shallow heart's the only thing that's beating. Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me, 'Til then I walk alone.[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] |
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costicuba
Country/State : Bulgaria Age : 43 Joined : 2014-06-14 Posts : 4221
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue May 19, 2015 2:02 pm | |
| You made a lovely model Anne-Joke Very nice paint job with him :)) |
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MiniZoo
Country/State : Australia Age : 28 Joined : 2011-02-01 Posts : 406
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue May 19, 2015 2:27 pm | |
| I can just imagine him coming to life - great figurine _________________ - Tahnaya [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] https://www.minizoo.com.au/ |
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SUSANNE Admin
Country/State : Denmark, the peninsula of Djursland. Age : 72 Joined : 2010-09-30 Posts : 37808
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue May 19, 2015 3:21 pm | |
| Fantastic I love the way he looks up at you, - "Have you got some treat for me ?" And the eyes, - the paws, the fur, - AWESOME |
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LeeAnn
Country/State : United States Age : 25 Joined : 2013-01-20 Posts : 10339
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue May 19, 2015 3:25 pm | |
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widukind
Country/State : Germany Age : 48 Joined : 2010-12-30 Posts : 45781
| Subject: Re: Golden retriever WIP - Finished Tue May 19, 2015 3:51 pm | |
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