Black Rhino Update

Before I add the final wrinkles and details I need suggestions to improve him. All criticism is welcome.
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Please could you share some real profile and from above views ?

I'm not sure if the eyes are not too bulging, but it's so beautiful overall!

I am just struck dumb ( yes, it IS possible !!!) with wonder !
What a fantastic model

It's wonderful work! Congratulations! (o)): I would like to see profile too, I think maybe line of the belly goes too much upwards in part nearer hind legs

WoW Wow Wow,

what a phantastic model

Here are the other pictures
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Great

Looking good!

Thanks everyone for the compliments I am glad you all like him.

I still don't know about the head I guess Fisva is right

He's fantastic Ethan! You're doing an excellent job

I agree with Christophe, maybe the head needs a little more work, especially the eyes.
They seem to stick out a bit too much, but he's really wonderful, can't wait to see him finished!

I re-sculpted the head and it is a little bit smaller so please all critiques so I can fix the face before I reattach the head, sorry it took me so long to post pictures I get really busy on week days. I am also adding fat to the stomach.
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Now it looks perfect!!!

Here is my point I've changed the eyes' place

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So you would like me to move the eyes down? correct me if I am wrong. I am glad you like the new face Fisva thanks.

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You could move eyes minimally backward as it is above, but if it is too much work you could leave it as it is already. The change would be so small that it wouldn't be very visible.

kudu11 wrote:

Before I add the final wrinkles and details I need suggestions to improve him. All criticism is welcome.
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Very successful model, congratulations (o)):

kudu11 wrote:

So you would like me to move the eyes down? correct me if I am wrong. I am glad you like the new face Fisva thanks.

Yes, it is my idea... My other idea is I like very much your work

I know it has been a while since I posted in this topic but I would like to finish one of these rhinos some time soon. I decided to restart the whole rhino. I used a rhino head as a basis that I originally made for the first rhino but was too small compared to the body. This rhino is slightly smaller and is still a work in progress. I would like any suggestions for any anatomical errors, so that I could fix them before I work on fine tuning muscle tone and texture him. I am hoping to make copies of him after I finish. All suggestions are welcome.

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He's looking so fabulous Ethan!!

I have been looking at the photo of your rhino sculpture that's looking straight on, I've tried to find photos similar for you to compare.
See how in these photos below, his tummy sticks out further than his shoulders, they're incredibly solid looking creatures.  The shoulders are perhaps too wide at the top and square on your sculpture, they should be narrower at the top and smoothly get wider towards the chest/torso making a kind of triangular shape.
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It's beautiful! Congrats!

Stunning!     

Great work, really fantastic.